The sweet nothings, the banter,
The endless chitter-chatter,
The scent of your presence,
The emotions that run so dense,
They seem so far away, so distant,
Come a little closer, it’s time to set right the invisible dent!
The sweet nothings, the banter,
The endless chitter-chatter,
The scent of your presence,
The emotions that run so dense,
They seem so far away, so distant,
Come a little closer, it’s time to set right the invisible dent!
Nice work. Describes the feeling of a lover well. You can sense the intimacy between the two and the passion that the narrator desires. π Love’s a beautiful thing.
I was also inspired by the emotion. I used nature an aid to describe a love for the night sky where I turn it into a woman. Check it out here: https://revitellect.wordpress.com/2017/03/16/mistress-in-the-sky-poem/
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